Category Archives: Haiku

Mare with Foal at Foot

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Haiku conceived at the agricultural show

Mare with foal at foot
Tower of maternal strength
Grand dam of the shires

A beautiful Shire Horse with her foal at the Agricultural show at Winterton, Lincolnshire

Harry Wells

Comments and critiques are welcome

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Promissum haiku

Quodcumque facis
Ibi tecum adero
Ubicumque vadis

Harry Wells

I am not too happy with my last line here because it has six syllables where it should have only five. In writing haiku the syllable count can be difficult. In a Latin haiku it’s even harder.
Can anybody improve this line without altering its meaning?
Harry Wells

Comments welcome